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 Beep. Beep. Beep.   [13+]
What if the Sun didn't come up? If everyone vanished? If you were alone?
by JTown
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi JTown ,

I'm reviewing as the judge of "Supernatural Writing Contest - Closed" .

I like your story and its flow. Once I began reading, I couldn't stop.

There was one main character, and it was as if he was speaking to me, telling me what was where in the city, how he viewed it, his thoughts and many things that people said were false.

I saw that the S in Sun was in uppercase, and wondered why. I had to keep reading up to the end to find out why there was no one in the entire city and what was the beep sound. What was the significance of the sound?

Keep writing such intriguing stories *Thumbsup*

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