Title was the first thing that captured my attention in this story and I am so glad it did! Main character was three dimensional, likeable and certainly someone readers could picture knowing. Description was strong, vivid in every scene. Inner dialogue moved thestory ahead with never one dull momment. I also hate night driving, so it was very easy to relate to this story. Your ending was done with flair! Shocking, devastating, I never saw it coming flair!
A great job and I could not find one thing that would be needed to improve this story.


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