1st review of the week


Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...you suggested it as one of the ones to review from your auction package.

First impressions...I think this is a wonderful piece, beautifully written and it was perfect when read aloud.

Was the title interesting...very interesting title, I think I would have chosen to read it even if you hadn't suggested it, based on the title.

Was the content rating appropriate...possibly a 13+ rating based on the content, but that is totally up to you.

Did you use a specific form of poetry...I believe it was free verse

Was there rhythm and flow...there was both, especially due to your use of consonance throughout the piece. Great job!

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...I noted no errors in any of these areas.

Things I would change...I would not change any of this, it is perfect the way it is written

Favorite parts/lines...

They are tethered
by their memories.

The imagery in these lines is perfect.


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