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Hello, pnut67. My name is Charlie and I'm happy to welcome you to the site with a review today. If you have any questions or need help navigating the site, feel free to email me. Keep in mind that the following is just one reader's opinion. I am not a professional and you know your writing best. If you find something helpful here, use it. If you don't, feel free to disregard this review completely. *Peace2*

*Beakerr* General Impressions: Your title caught my attention, so I thought I'd have a read. I'm not a super avid Survivor watcher, but I have watched several seasons, so it was interesting to see what your thoughts were on how to survive. I didn't know that they went out a couple weeks early and met each other then, so I learned something new! *Laugh*

*Beakerb* Best Parts: I think you're spot on with a lot of your surviving Survivor rules. I'm surprised at how many people don't realize how much they're going to have to pay in taxes on that one million. I wouldn't think it would be more than fifty percent, which would still leave them half a mil, but people seem to think game show earnings are tax free. It's quite the opposite, isn't it?

Number eleven was my favorite because this bugs me too when I watch the show. They always vote off their strong players before the merge just because they're either looking too far ahead or they don't like the person's attitude. So what? It's a game! There's nothing fun about watching one tribe vote off all their strong players and then having the other tribe annihilate every challenge until the merge. It's boring!

*Beakero* Possible Suggestions: I know this is written with a casual tone, so I'm not too picky about the grammar, but I do think it might hurt readership a little bit. If someone doesn't actively watch the show, they may not be bothered to read through the lack of grammar and big chunks of text, even though they are broken down on a list.

*Beakerv* Summary: Your article was a lot of fun to read and I agree with you on most of your points. I think you'd do well on the show if you were able to go out there. I'm with you though; I've got no dreams of going to an island for that long. The only thing I might suggest is to work with the grammar and walls of text to make it a bit more easy to read. Thanks again for sharing with us!

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