Review 4 for the week


Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...you won three poetry reviews and I found this in your portfolio.

First impressions...a very interesting piece, I liked it.

Was the title interesting...yes, a slight nod to a certain Dr?

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...I note no particular form, if there is please let me know


Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...you did not have a particular pattern in you piece

Did the rhymes seem forced...none of the rhymes seemed forced, all the lines fit well together.

Was there rhythm and flow...I would have preferred to have seen more meter and even syllable counts in the lines, but that is just my opinion

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...as suggested earlier I would have made the lines of equal length

Favorite parts/lines...I enjoyed the whole piece.


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