Review 5 of the week


Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...you were the high bidder for my review package and I found this in your portfolio

First impressions...I found a few spelling errors which distracted from the content of the poem.

Was the title interesting...yes

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...none noted

Did the rhymes seem forced...your rhyming contributed to the flow of the poem.

Was there rhythm and flow...as stated above the rhyming helped the flow

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...yes,
The sun is shinning.(shining)
Doesn't look much like she gliding. (she's)
she's is complete! (she's or she is)


Once the errors are fixed I would like you to let me know and I will re-evaluate the piece






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