Review 6 of the week

Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...this is the third of the poems I am reviewing

First impressions...this one I really enjoyed! A fun little piece

Was the title interesting...yes, especially with the intro

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...none noted

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...I loved the way you tied the lines together with the rhymes, made the poem whimsical

Did the rhymes seem forced...not at all, everything fit together very well

Were words forced to fit syllable count...no syllable count necessary

Was there rhythm and flow...yes, the rhymes really helped tying the lines together

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...only one, chickens should be chicken's in the third line

Things I would change...nothing, it is a cute little poem

Favorite parts/lines...I enjoyed the whole piece


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