}Review 2 number # of week Nov.13-19, 2014

Hi Maranda,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Schrodinger's Cat

First Impression: I took the time to look up on Google exactly was Schrodinger's Cat experiment, interesting experiment.

What I liked: I agree it is possible to be dead and alive at the same time. I was in a marriage that made me feel dead inside yet my physical body went thru the emotions everyday.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it works just as it.

Favorite Parts: Arousing the curiosity of the reader and opening another door for discussion. It is indeed thought provoking and certainly does exist the dual possibilities.

Overall Impression: A very simple and direct free verse that encourages the reader to see outside the box.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .