Review number 3 # of week November 13-19th, 2014

Hi Luka,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Closure

First Impression: Welcome back to WDC. I hope you find what you are looking for here.

What I liked: Chemical distortion brewing in my mind, delightful imagery to the readers mind of a person drinking to make the pain go away. I felt the sadness as I read and the author mulled in misery.

What needs your attention: Nothing, the poems works well in free verse. I might suggest crystal rain piercing the sky would sound better as air since it feels to me that the individual is inside.

Favorite Parts: I like the inevitable depression hits, it summarizes the poem clearly for the reader and adds to the climatic closing moment when the individual opens eyes, and recites her broken tale, I no longer love you.

Overall Impression: It is very well done.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .