Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...because you wanted me to review one of the Monster Mash pieces. I could not give it a one star rating... too much good in it!

First impressions...I liked it, what a fun little poem, I also enjoyed learning a new form.

Was the title interesting...Yes, indeed it was.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes, I am sure there are pieces in the group that are "worse" than this... in terms of gruesomeness

Did you use a specific form of poetry...yes, La'libertes

Did you follow the form...the form was followed with the exception of the third stanza with the rhyme scheme... you noted that the scheme was to be baab but your scheme was abab

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it... the first stanza - according to form was abba and the third was abab. The other stanzas did not have rhymes schemes as per the form guidelines

Did the rhymes seem forced...no, all the lines and words fit together well

Were words forced to fit syllable count...also none of the counts seemed forced either

Was there rhythm and flow...due to your use of alliteration, rhyme , meter and simile your flow and rhythm were great. (your use of these poetic devices was why I could not give you a one star rating)

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...I noted no errors in any of these areas

Things I would change...the biggest change I would make would be to change the rhyme scheme in the third stanza

Favorite parts/lines...I like the dog poop blazing on the stoop!


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