Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I decided to go through my favorite authors list and review a piece from each of them, and you are on my list!

First impressions...I love this, what a cute poem/story on how the Easter Egg hunt began.

Was the title interesting...As I was going through your portfolio I stopped at this poem wondering what the whole story was going to be. I certainly was not disappointed!

Was the content rating appropriate...could have easily been an 'e', I think

Did you use a specific form of poetry...I don;t recognize a particular form, let me know if there was one used.

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...yes, aa,bb,cc,etc

Did the rhymes seem forced...no, you used them well to tell your story. I enjoyed them very much

Were words forced to fit syllable count...n/a

Was there rhythm and flow...Your story-telling skills and great imagery made the flow excellent, and the rhythm of the rhyme scheme was phenomenal! I enjoyed your poem!

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...I don't think I would change a thing, as I said you have a great skill of story-telling

Favorite parts/lines...with these lines I could see a light bulb right above the Easter Bunny's head as he reached his epiphany...

The children had such fun finding his lost eggs one by one.
He jumped to his feet with a quick hop grabbed the basket and with a run.

Excellent Job!


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