Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I decided to go through my list of favorite authors and review a piece from each of them, somehow I found you on my list

First impressions...I really enjoyed this poem, I have trouble with sonnets because of meter, but I find the more I read good ones the more I learn!

Was the title interesting...Absolutely, Wonderful hint of the poem...

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...Australian Sonnet

Did you follow the form...as far as I can tell yes. The rhymes were correct, I just have trouble determining the meter.

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...envelope abba, cddc etc

Did the rhymes seem forced...not at all, you choose your words wisely and created a wonderful piece. Excellent work!

Were words forced to fit syllable count...no, everything fit together very well.

Was there rhythm and flow...yes, due to the rhyme scheme, meter and imagery. I love the joyous horror, use of the oxymoron...

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...nothing

Favorite parts/lines...I especially enjoyed these lines..

Somewhere, someone will feel his bite;
They are not victim – they are prey.

The imagery in these lines is wonderful. Instead of me picturing him jumping out on his victim I can see the whole pursuit through the woods. Plus, it makes him more of the hunter than the murderer.

Another great job, Ken!


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