Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I am going through my list of favorite writers and your name was next.

First impressions...I really enjoyed this poem; and I can't even put my finger on exactly why. I love the rhythm and the flow and especially the imagery.

Was the title interesting...As I was going through all the pieces in your portfolio this piece caught my eye mainly because in my younger years at my parent's rental cottage I would hunt for such stones.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...none noted, please let me know if there was a form used

Was there rhythm and flow...you have painted a wonderful picture here, going from the obvious; the action of finding stones to the metaphor of the stones as relating to life. Use use alliteration to your advantage as well.

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...no noted

Things I would change...I would change nothing, this is a great poem that I am thrilled that I found

Favorite parts/lines...you’ll stay home
inside yourself
and a stone will still wear
your shadow.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece!


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