Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...because I am going through my list of favorite authors and you are next on my list!

First impressions...I enjoyed all three of these pieces- I am going to specifically review the last of the three for the sake of a 'worthy' review

Was the title interesting...I stopped on these particular poems because I have just finished the Poetic Explorations workshop and this was one of the forms we worked on.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...yes - Tetractys

Did you follow the form...yes, the syllable counts were right on! Great job

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...this form does not have a required rhyme scheme

Did the rhymes seem forced...n/a

Were words forced to fit syllable count...no, the worship this poem represents is purely wonderful and from the heart! Great job!

Was there rhythm and flow...yes, a pure offering from the heart and I enjoyed it very much!

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...no errors noted

Things I would change...not a thing, Perfection

Favorite parts/lines...I enjoyed the whole poem you have done a wonderful job!


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