Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I was going through my list of favorite authors and decided to write a review for each one, you were next on my list.

First impressions...This is a wonderful Christmas poem, reflecting upon the real emotion and reason for the season.

Was the title interesting...most definitely! As I was going through your portfolio this title caught my eye.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...none noted

Did you follow the form...n/a

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...aabb, ccdd etc

Did the rhymes seem forced...no, the lines fit together perfectly.

Were words forced to fit syllable count...not at all

Was there rhythm and flow...there was great rhythm and flow, your wonderful choice of words lends to wonderful flow

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...nothing

Favorite parts/lines...

“Hail to the King”, the crowd sent out its cry,
as the most brilliant night star lit up the sky.

These lines are beautiful and yet make me think of the scourge top befall Jesus during Lent and Good Friday

Excellent job!

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