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Hello there, shaara
This is a Simply Positve Review. *Leaf2g*

I found your poem highlighted in the Poetry Newsletter. *Smile*

*Painting3* You demonstrate the magic of the dreidle as it would be through the eyes of the children during Hanukkah.

*Candleb* I enjoyed the symbolism and the prize to be won when the spinning stops on a particular symbol. The chocolate win must be exciting for the children. I could imagine them spinning for hours trying to get the lucky symbol to receive back some of the chocolate they may have lost or had to give to the game for the next cycle.

I learned something new today with the words used for each symbol and what they represent. *Check5*

*Vignette7* Your poem is very visual and keeps the rhythm for the most part. I think the second last line is a bit wordy compared to the ending line. However, it doesn't spoil the general momentum of the poem.

Well done! *Teab*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch





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