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 Snow tigers   []
Short poem about snow tigers being hunted
by Kay11
Review of Snow tigers  
Review by Charlie ~
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Rated: | (4.0)
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Hello, Kay11 . My name is Charlie and I'm happy to welcome you to the site with a review today. If you have any questions or need help navigating the site, feel free to email me. Keep in mind that the following is just one reader's opinion. I am not a professional and you know your writing best. If you find something helpful here, use it. If you don't, feel free to disregard this review completely. *Snow1*

*Ornament2r* General Impressions: This poem pays tribute to the majestic creature that is the snow tiger. It talks about how they're being driven into extinction by hunters and urges them not to 'go'. I wanted to read this when I saw the title because snow tigers are so cool.

*Ornament1g* Best Parts: I like the message to this poem. It's sad that people would let a beautiful creature die off so they could hunt it for superficial things like fur. So many great animals are dwindled down by uncaring people who wish to ruin the beauty of nature. It's terrible when people do this to animals that are already few in numbers. We can't afford to lose any! I like the line about rich women wanting to wear their coats and gloat about it.

*Ornament3r* Possible Suggestions: I didn't like the flow of the line: Only 200, are there left. I know that it needs to rhyme with the next line, but left/nest don't quite rhyme anyway, so I think there may be some other near rhymes that would work better there and allow for straightforward writing of that line.

*Ornament4g* Summary: Overall, I enjoyed reading this story and seeing your perspective of the hunting of endangered species. Thanks again for sharing with us!

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