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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello morlaelome

This is quite a passionate, heartfelt poem. I love the title, and the poem is very atmospheric. Some great use of imagery -- especially with the ashes.

I do just wonder if you meant 'Gods' to be plural or if 'God's' might have been more what you had in mind.

I think you use rhyme well to help the poem flow. I enjoyed reading your poem.

Keep writing.

Best wishes,
Mark


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