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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello fyn

This is a magical, uplifting poem that I found a joy to read, and which has got me more into the Christmas spirit. The sense of wonder and magic come across so well in this piece. I think there's a lot to love here and both children and adults can enjoy the story you weave.

I think the pacing is a little uneven in places, though admittedly that might just be how I'm reading it. I find reading work aloud can help locate any parts which may need a little editing to smooth out.

Overall though I found this a well-crafted, delightful poem.

Thanks for sharing your work.

Best wishes,
Mark


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