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The Long Road Home  [ASR]
A Tennessee family finds the Spirit of Christmas
by W.D.Wilcox
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello there, billwilcox
This is a Simply positive Review! *Ornament1r*

*Happycry* Boy, I tell you buddy, you sure know how to tug at the old heartstrings, there. Your story is the heart and spirit of Christmas. You have family, love and warmth that fill the imagination and hit the nostalgia button. *Home*

I enjoyed and admired each of the characters in your story. The mother was a sweet, gentle woman who truly demonstrated love and strength with her son. The little boy -- typical, excited over Christmas, dreams will come true hopes of a bunk bed-- another precious moment, for which child chooses furniture over toys? The dad was a dedicated and loving family man, resolved to make his wife and child's dreams come true for Christmas. *Xmastree*

*Ornament1g* I loved the spirit of his dad's spirit, which was indeed fortunate for this man on a busy Christmas eve. Beautiful!

Typo:
"Jesse eyes sparkled as he climbed on top of his dad." [Jesse's]

Not a sufficient reason to rate this anything below 5 *STAR*s. Excellent story that I expect to see played out on the Hallmark Channel one of these Christmas seasons to come. *Trees* *Wink*

Until next time--write on!

*Angel* AND, a very Merry Christmas to you and yours, Bill.

*Santahat*
~WW



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