Review number #4 of week Dec. 4-10th

Hi Maranda

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Crumble

First Impression: For a short thing it says a lot.

What I liked: How powerful the words were when read out loud.

What needs your attention: Nothing!

Favorite Parts: Grief as you said does make you feel as if you will crumble into many pieces. There is no easy way to cope.

Overall Impression: Excellent job!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .