I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" .
Thanks so much for entering!

Some things I Like:

Very nice intro. The 'My name is' could be more creative, but I do think that the rest of the paragraph is quirky, fun, and packed with character.

Observations & Suggestions:

The piece could use a general edit. Things like "Y'all" and "Ma'am" and "nickname" could be spelled in the traditional manner, for instance.

After the introduction, the biographical info seems haphazard, and the character's voice seems to disappear a bit. Creating a complete character in 360 words can be difficult, and although you were off to a great start, it didn't quite gel in the end for me. With some revision, this could be a very strong piece though.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .