I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" .
Thanks so much for entering!

Some things I Like:

Super cute idea here! At first, I thought this was going to be another muse-as-a-character type of piece. Pleased to see that you went a different route with it.

Observations & Suggestions:

As I was reading, I kept thinking of cartoonists. Perhaps because of the same clothes every day and the way you describes the shrubs. In my mind, I saw a comic strip character. I have the feeling that you may have intended it to be a written character-- perhaps a children's book or something? Anyway, a written character is mover 'clever', but I love the comic strip visuals.

There are tons of great details in here too, though the character voice is sort of boring at times (not very emotive). I do wish that it had been a bit longer, as it would have been awesome to have some time to wonder and ponder and allow the pieces to slip into place.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .