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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello S Grace

This is a very thoughtful poem about the opportunity for connections which strangers can provide. I love the section at the beginning of the poem about how we are all branches born from the same tree.

I think the huge difference in line lengths in this poem disrupt the flow, making the pace of the poem rather uneven. This aside your work shows talent and you've chosen a great subject to write about. Great title as well.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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