This is a beautiful poem. It's so hard to write anything new and creative in the area of love poetry but you've done a great job here. I love the analogy. You say a great deal with very few words -- a skill you're a real master of. As usual your words flow well and I love the sound of the poem.
I really like the idea of the light of happy times reflecting through the rain of difficulties. It's so important to hold on to hope and good memories when times are tough.
You can certainly consider this another successful campfire poem. Love it! Well done.
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