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 The Doors  [E]
Short Poem
by The_Empress
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello The_Empress

This short poem is dark and emotional. I think many readers will relate to the fear of the unknown; of what could be awaiting on the other side of the door. You create a real atmosphere with your words, and I was able to picture the scene.

Your last line packs an emotional punch.

The whole poem flows well and shows real talent.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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