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 Memories With Photographs   [E]
Memories With Photographs
by arlene
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello arlene

This is a powerful, effective poem dealing with loss and memories. The poem flows well and the reader can feel the emotion behind the words. Your title is effective too. I like how you start each stanza with the same line -- with a slight variation in the last stanza.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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