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Hi JDON ,

I liked this story about a woman enjoying her meal in a restaurant that never actually exited.

I knew there was something strange/ unusual when her food got over at her third bite.

I did spot a few grammatical/punctuation errors. I have listed a few. If you're interested click here
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I wanted to know more. I'd really like it if you continued this mysterious and intriguing story.

Write on!
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