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A Place Called Anomie - Chapter 3  [18+]
G. Continues to wander in search of himself - If he realizes yet that he isn't there.
by Geoff
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Geoff,

I read chapter 3, and I really liked it. It told me more about G, his feelings, and also introduced a very interesting character, Sashimi.

The chipping in of the narrator was great because it made things clearer and gave out more of G.

My favorite was Sahimi's character. I liked the way she was shy in her eyes but boldly walked up to G, and spoke so openly. It was so nice when she burped out loud. I thought she was very interesting, and drove this chapter so much. She even indirectly controlled G, who ended up giving her his room keys, and probably paying the bill of her food?

I picked a few niggles but none stopped the flow of the story.

I wonder what happens next with Sashimi and G. I kept wanting to read more.

Great work!
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