First Thoughts: I discovered "Dear Diary"  on "The Shameless "Plug" Page" . The first paragraph hooked me with Sandy's question why does life have to be soooo boring?

What I liked: I like Sandy because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Suggestions For Improvement: This sentence appears to be Sandy's thoughts, Oh well diary time i guess. I suggest putting the sentence in italics. I also suggest making this part of a longer story or novel featuring Sandy as the main character.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because the main character is intriguing and the story has a great deal of potential. Write on.

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