First Thoughts: I discovered "The Girl with Silver Bracelets"  on "The Shameless "Plug" Page" . The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot with a thought provoking lesson.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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