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Hello there, kymee
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Teapotr*

*Clouds* I felt the emotional tug of war going on between mind and spirit. It is very tough to leave behind that which we have become accustomed to -- a comfortable place that has been all we really know. However, it is a true sign of bravery to break out of the bonds of that which only adds to the loss of ourselves, our hearts and souls and self-respect.

*Crab* When one can claw out of the rubble that has buried them deeply to the point of almost no return, that person is a true winner. One doing that can never be a loser. The changes akin to "growing pains" take time as healing, just as growing, can be a slow process. Nevertheless, when faith is strong and clear, one is never abandoned, for He will guide and bless those who ask for His help.

*Die5* Your poem is very poignant, and it hits the raw nerves of human beings struggling through life's road blocks and mazes. Not everyone will recognize which fork in the road to take -- the one that is already known, or, the path less traveled. It could appear dusty and shady and look a bit frightening, but may be the gateway to beautiful, sunny fields of hope and love. *Pointleft*


Observation:

"I think I have a conscious now," I believe you meant to say "conscience."

*Blocky* Although the subject matter was very serious, the poem covered it in a realistic yet smooth way, conveying an deeper understanding to the reader.

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch






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