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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello jimmyfin

I really like the Terzanelle form, and you do a great job working with it here. You've obviously chosen your words carefully and your repeating lines are particularly strong. The poem is suitably emotional given its theme of lost / absent love but it's well controlled, never getting melodramatic or overly sentimental.

This was a pleasure to read. I'm sure many readers will be able to relate to the subject matter. I know I can.

Congratulations on having this featured in the poetry newsletter.

Best wishes,
Mark


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