I often use the newsletters for reviewing fodder.
Glad you knew of your inclusion in Shannon's NL.
I liked the back and forth of this. Like a conversation that creates the whole of your short story.
Form and structure is essentially that of a transcript of a conversation between two celestial stars here in the WdC.
Flow is smooth and whimsical too.
Emotionally the reader is interested enough to continue to journeys end.
Pace is just right and with the additional wow of no grammatical snafu's you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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