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On Angel's Wings  [13+]
An infants POV of his death, by his nurse
by NurseWriter
Review of On Angel's Wings  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Spiritual Newsletter 1-21-15,
displays your beautiful piece.

God bless you for being a nurse.
Your work comes with a price.
Your story is a part of real life and the reader feels the emotion you fill this memorial with.
The reader feels sadness indeed, and in the end he/she feels the sense of release as the child no longer suffers.
Form and structure are well suited.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and emotionally filled with just the right amounts to keep the reader glued to his/her seat.
Grammatically speaking you are free of visible infractions.

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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