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Greetings, kedwards48 ! Thank you for entering "Invalid Item"  in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" !

*Reading* I love this! Great job!

*Thumbsupr* I especially like this stanza:

“Finally the new girl, just last year she came
and since she's arrived, things just aren't the same.
She's spoiled and selfish, it's true, that's a fact.
Like a spoiled young sister, she's oh such a brat.

*Star* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
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