Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I selected poetry under items to read and sorted them by newest first. Yours was first on the list.

First impressions...I enjoyed your poem very much

Was the title interesting...Yes, especially with the introduction as well. It lets the reader know more about what to expect.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes, nothing above an 'e'

Did you use a specific form of poetry...none noted, if there was a particular form please let me know.

Did you follow the form...n/a

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...n /a

Did the rhymes seem forced...n/a

Were words forced to fit syllable count...no syllable count noted

Was there rhythm and flow...your great use of imagery lent well to your flow in the poem.

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...nothing, I enjoyed this piece

Favorite parts/lines...


To march across the heavy, thunderous skies
And chase the monsters back again.
Beneath the weight of golden rays,
The clouds, at last, take begrudged leave.


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