Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I was going through the list of items by type and clicked on poetry and found this piece.

First impressions...I have trouble writing Haiku but I enjoy reading it. This is a lovely piece.

Was the title interesting...yes, one does not know who the friend is until the poem is read, great job

Was the content rating appropriate...yes, nothing above an 'e' in this

Did you use a specific form of poetry...yes, Senryu

Did you follow the form...yes, you followed the form well.

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...no, none required

Did the rhymes seem forced...n/a

Were words forced to fit syllable count...nothing seemed forced, all the words are well placed and chosen

Was there rhythm and flow...yes

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...nothing, as I stated I have difficulty writing this form because of trying to stay within the syllable count. You have done a wonderful job with this piece!

Favorite parts/lines...the whole thing

Excellent work!


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