"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 

Hello there, Mina~
This is a Simply Positive Review!

I loved the images I received through your poem, of a magpie and its showy ways and lilting voice. The reader can feel the enjoyment you receive by having this bird around.

Lovely imagery!

Observations:
Your poem could use some punctuation marks, to help with the flow. I think, perhaps, English may not be your first language. It's nothing really far off, just a few subtle glitches that caught my attention.

For example:

"I wonder how you sing O’ sweet Magpie" [?] A question mark would bring the questioning of how the bird sings to a smooth line end for the reader.

"Something sing in low notes sometimes high" [Awkwardly stated.]
TRY: Sometimes you sing in low notes, sometimes high.

"You’re not trained though sing so well" Your not trained, yet, you sing so well! Just an idea of what punctuation could do to add impact to the line.

"With you I’m woke you’re my morning alarm" {Awkwardly stated]
TRY: Your song awakens me -- like a morning alarm.

These are just a few examples of a little word change here and there and some well placed punctuation for impact and smooth flow.

Otherwise, well done, and the image of the singing magpie made me smile.

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch





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