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Review #4081036
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 Will You Still Love Me Through 4 Seasons  [E]
I randomly typed this. I do not know much of poetry's rules and principles. Enjoy!
by Son Nguyen
Review by ~Minja~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Son Nguyen *Smile*
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It's been pleasure to review your "Will You Still Love Me Through 4 Seasons"  on behalf of The Simply Positive Group. Please be reminded that my review is based on one person's opinion and you have all rights to choose if you like it or not. So please feel free to use if you find something interesting or just ignore if you don't like something.

*Star* Why I chose to review your poem?
Hi there. I'm so happy to find your "Will You Still Love Me Through 4 Seasons"  while I was searching Read a Newbie public list. To be honest I also know almost nothing about poetry rules and I wanted to see how you're doing it since you mentioned that you typed this randomly. I also liked the title of your poem.

*Star* My suggestion?
I see that you're doing pretty good with using Writing.com tools. Your poem is colorful and seasonal just like you said in title. This is free verse poem and it's beautiful like that. I would just take out yellow color from here just for the reason it's hard to read it online because it's too bright. *Smile*

*Star* What I liked the most?
Since I was born in autumn that part of your poem I loved the most. I write poems here now maybe often, but I have found that the most beautiful one can be written when nature starts to die. But this is just in my case I believe.

*Star* Final thought?
Poetry is one way to express yourself. It's universal language for all souls in this world. Why poetry? Because of life. The one who never experienced poetry he never experienced life in its fullness. Welcome to WdC one more time and I hope you will enjoy in your stay here. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
~Minja~
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