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Cellblock  [ASR]
Bah on Valentine's Day.
by Jatog the Green
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Jatog the Green ,

I was found your poem in the random review and I have some comments

I like this poem very much because it was fun and the tone was light. As much as it had the holiday spirit, the persona was a bit down because he was alone on Valentine's.

The cover image told me that it's a funny poem around the issue on love. I enjoyed the regular rhyme structure and the almost equal syllable on every line because they made the poem flow so well.

Well done and write on!
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