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Hello Unapologetic Poetess a beautiful poem about spring.*Leaf2r* Its time to renewal. After a long winter *Leaf2y* spring comes in the earth . The colors of spring is the best of all season. Marigold, dahlia so many flowers *Flower3* smiles in the garden. Cuckoo*Bird* sings on her melody hiding in the leaves. *Leaf2g* Our poetic mind wish to write poem. In your poem you described the beauty of spring beautifully.

I like the lines most

Streets fill with sweet smells
Of new life
Mixing with sour musk
Of sun-baked dumpsters
Behind seafood restaurants.

Keep writing

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