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Review of Roses Red

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

An interesting style of poem. I don't think I have ever seen one with this type of pattern.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

There is a repetitive aspect to the pattern. lines are short and sort of punch out the thoughts.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

keep writing.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

\in week 11 just a couple more to go.


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