Hi ENB , I found your poem on the I-write page and I'm here to review it, as per the rules. I hope you find my comments useful!

General Comments:
This was a very intense poem- I felt like I was speeding up as I read it, and rushing to the end.
I saw it says your poem is "dark"- but I liked it. It felt more like a reflective sort of dark than a horrifying sort of dark.
I read up on the "blitz" format- you followed it very well. Good job!


Overall, I really liked your poem. I don't know much about poetry, but I thought it was well written. I just said "wow" when I finished reading it. Keep writing!