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His Cold Thin Self  [E]
A magic fork.
by Jatog the Green
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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There was admittedly some interest just from the title. lol On a few spots I did reread since the meter and I didn't get along. lol But the count was always right on. It must have been me.

Must have been magic because it was all I could imagine with it turning the weight of a railroad spike, plus other stuff. lol

I couldn't figure out what the flashing lights were, but thought it fun they came alive.

I loved the ending, paid in full. However I do have a question...where did the eating utensils go? lol

Thanks for sharing with us.

love, LinnAnn

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