Greetings, 🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷 ! Thank you for bidding on my Children's Package in "Genre Auction and Fundraiser" . This concludes the reviews.

I absolutely adore this! Your words are beautiful, your rhyme is perfect, and your flow is lovely! What else can I say? You definitely are gifted, 🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷 !

Just one itsy-bitsy suggestion. And, yet, I feel This is the only place that felt a wee bit awkward with those commas as pause. You might want to eliminate at least the first comma for a better flow... And yet, I feel

I love this. Absolutely! Nice work.

Favorite lines...

What's this I see
In front of me?
A beauty bright and fair.
She looks at me
With kind query
And starlight in her hair.

It's been a pleasure, Carol! I wish you the best in all your writing endeavors!

Have a great day and...
K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


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