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Hello ROSΣANNΣ|NaPoWriMo|WGT|JDI

This wonderful little haiku put a smile on my face. You capture the moment beautifully. I love the simile of the tree root. I also like the intimacy of your well chosen words, and their intimation of love.

Great example of the form.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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