Review number # 1 of week 2/12-2/18

Hi Cheri,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive and to welcome you to BLOG CITY!

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Founder's Day

First Impression: I love storytelling with children, what a delightful way to share a story.

What I liked: The way the children picked up where she left off, anxious to hear the story.

What needs your attention: Nothing.

Favorite Parts: The sister rescuing her sister, sisters are like that. They wouldn't bat an eye about helping or even think of the risk involved.

Overall Impression: I never saw it coming that she would die in the end. I was saddened that she lost her sister. I truly enjoyed reading this, I would love to see one of the children sharing the story with her own children about Aunt Josie that day and about her sister. Beautifully told!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .