Review number 3 # of week 2/12-2/18

Hi Poetess,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: IV Fall

First Impression: Wondering about the title and the poem, I am missing the connection.

What I liked: Muted kaleidoscope of color, I love looking through them and seeing all the possibilities that can be created.

What needs your attention: The title to me just doesn't fit.

Favorite Parts: Healing isn't an event, but a process, a ceaseless march forward. Yes, I agree it doesn't happen instantly, it takes time, patience and perseverance.

Overall Impression: Well written. I would love to hear back from you about the title, maybe I'll understand it better.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .