Review number # 4 of week2/12-2/18th

Hi Juliet,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Window

First Impression: Interesting topic.

What I liked: By the window is the best place to be. I love looking out the window too! I always notice something new, each time.

What needs your attention: The last two lines in the second stanza I think would sound better if you changed the order.

Favorite Parts: Yes, I agree looking out into the countryside is much nicer than looking out in a city.

Overall Impression: Congratulations on your first poem.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .